THE UNFAIR LIFE.
Oh my dear why were you so unfair?
Why implode my dreams?
Why take me the way I most feared?
Why convince me to go against my heart?
I am now shattered,
Lost and Forlorn.
None realised that there is pain within,
even if i did carry that dazed smile.
Throbbing memories haunt the nights,
I stay awake like an insomniac.
Crying does not help nor does advice,
Arguments and explosions happen within.
Eventually I realize , I still live and I can ,
i start a fresh new life.
I have chosen a new path
but with a difference.
I tread along with Hope as my lamp,
And experience to anoint when in need.
Copyright © Meenu
Just another stupid poem of moi....
Take care & Good night!
6 hands have coloured my post so far!:
Good one girl. U can write only when u feel right.
I liked the flow... but it was tough to understand what u meant...
anyways... have a good life...
@ Pri
thnaks pri ...:)but i still insist that this is a 'not so good ' poem :)
@ vishwak
:) hmmm well thanks..
these are complex thoughts so kind of difficult to comprehend .. so never mind :)
@ vish
infact i am not sure if this poem speaks my heart .. :D i mean i myself am doubtful if i have conveyed what i thought.,...
anyways thanks !!
Dear Meenu,
One of those abstract style of writing , looks like this is first time you tried. what happens is the reader has to put a thinking cap and work on the little cranium! And has to even read between lines....
Good attempt!
Hey when are you publishing your book of poems?
Cheers
Ravi shivram,
Brand Guru.
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